slightly better descriptions

mojolicious · Aug 27, 2016 · a8815dc · a8815dc
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@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 
-7.04  2016-08-26
-  - Added EXPERIMENTAL support for performing expensive blocking operations in
-    subprocesses. (jberger, sri)
+7.04  2016-08-27
+  - Added EXPERIMENTAL support for performing computationally expensive
+    operations in subprocesses, without blocking the event loop. (jberger, sri)
   - Added EXPERIMENTAL module Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess. (jberger, sri)
   - Added EXPERIMENTAL subprocess method to Mojo::IOLoop. (jberger, sri)
   - Fixed bug where Mojo::UserAgent would try to follow redirects for CONNECT

diff --git a/lib/Mojo/IOLoop.pm b/lib/Mojo/IOLoop.pm
@@ -607,12 +607,12 @@ Get L<Mojo::IOLoop::Stream> object for id or turn object into a connection.
   my $sp = Mojo::IOLoop->subprocess(sub {...}, sub {...});
   my $sp = $loop->subprocess(sub {...}, sub {...});
 
-Build L<Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess> object to perform expensive operations in
-subprocesses, without blocking the event loop. Callbacks will be passed along to
-L<Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess/"run">. Note that this method is EXPERIMENTAL and
-might change without warning!
+Build L<Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess> object to perform computationally expensive
+operations in subprocesses, without blocking the event loop. Callbacks will be
+passed along to L<Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess/"run">. Note that this method is
+EXPERIMENTAL and might change without warning!
 
-  # Perform an expensive blocking operation in a subprocess
+  # Operation that would block the event loop for 5 seconds
   Mojo::IOLoop->subprocess(
     sub {
       my $sp = shift;

diff --git a/lib/Mojo/IOLoop/Subprocess.pm b/lib/Mojo/IOLoop/Subprocess.pm
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess - Subprocesses
 
   use Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess;
 
-  # Perform an expensive blocking operation in a subprocess
+  # Operation that would block the event loop for 5 seconds
   my $sp = Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess->new;
   $sp->run(
     sub {
@@ -77,9 +77,9 @@ Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess - Subprocesses
 
 =head1 DESCRIPTION
 
-L<Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess> allows L<Mojo::IOLoop> to perform expensive blocking
-operations in subprocesses. Note that this module is EXPERIMENTAL and might
-change without warning!
+L<Mojo::IOLoop::Subprocess> allows L<Mojo::IOLoop> to perform computationally
+expensive operations in subprocesses, without blocking the event loop. Note that
+this module is EXPERIMENTAL and might change without warning!
 
 =head1 ATTRIBUTES